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Drifting along the pathway in huge circles,
the legs are shaking, almost jelly-like.
The mind working hard on life hurdles
pushes the brain to go on strike.

Both eyes, tired, cannot see for seductive light
that the sidewalk turns round and round.
Sense of direction is off, not quite right.
The being is lost, convulsing on the ground.

The mastership of vicious circle is superior;
no human soul can fight it without aid.
No one is such a gigantean solitary warrior.
Therefore, ask for help, and do not be afraid!

~Petra
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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hi there,
your lovely work  has been featured here: Weekly Feature
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
awww :D
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:la:
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AmbushRealityLeader Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! Great job!! :D
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
glad u like it :D
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anndilek Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the last verse is just really good point, good work!
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
:)
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Llewellyn89 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your great with words
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
my friend dictionary helps me all the time ;)
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